correction of Corrections & Notes to what kind of fiction is Charles Kinbote's Foreword?

[Terrance]

Terrance: 

is sleeping in now, in this house by the sea reflecting on an omitted
article 

(a) here  cool clouds

(b) mile 

(insert (S) 

away from the violence and blood that spills out each night onto our
streets.

Eliminating the article (a) do we need to 
(1) pluralize "clouds" and 
(2) keep the ambiguity in tact?

is the house reflecting cool clouds like jazz contemplated? 

are the clouds mile(s) away or is the house?  



 Let me state that without my notes Shade's shade simply has no human
reality at all since the human reality of such a poem as his (being to,
too, two] 

both / and 

shady and spiritual  


too 


for a  non-posthumous work), with the omission of many handsome choices