TWITs today?

Anville Azote anville.azote at gmail.com
Tue Dec 12 09:55:35 CST 2006


> On Dec 10, 2006, at 8:21 PM, pynchonoid quoted:
>
>   For several years I have had my level of
> consciousness calibrated on the Dr. David Hawkins M.D.
> map of consciousness.
>

In reply to which, on 12/11/06, Steven <mcquaryq at omitted> wrote:
>
>  Great first sentence for a novel -- in fact, it's very suggestive of
> Barth's opening sentence for End of the Road.
>

The repetition of "consciousness" is grating.  I'd swap one of them
with "enlightenment" or some such --- but yeah, it'd make a great
opener.

-A. A.



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