Atdtda[4]: p. 97-99: 5 paragraphs and a camera eye

[Michel]

The first 5 paragraphs offer a structured, filmic view:

Para 1:  A filmic overview.  No distinct characters. The camera switches 
very quickly and offers short scenes. 19 lines

Para 2-3:  A close up. Kit, riding the circuit (as in electrical 
circuit, and in travelling workers circuit); his 'attitude' towards 
electricity. The camera just comes nearer and nearer. 7 and 11 lines

Para 4:  Kit studying hard science, or a mere need to study.  We are in 
his head now -- 7 lines

Para 5:  Kit's "conversion".  Mysticism. This paragraph is nearly as 
long as the 4 preceding: 37 lines.

What do you think?

Michel.









	

	
		
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