IVIV (1) Something about, I Forget ...

[Joe Allonby]

Try it. Just read it aloud. I like it.

On Wed, Aug 26, 2009 at 11:15 AM, Dave Monroe<against.the.dave at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wed, Aug 26, 2009 at 10:08 AM, Joe Allonby<joeallonby at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> I disagree, Dave. Read it aloud with an air of heavy sarcasm. People
>> talk that way.
>
> It strikes me as unusually clumsy, esp. if meant to scan
> naturalistically, esp. as Pynchon is a master of implication by
> ellipsis ("'Tantivy ...'") ...
>