IVIV p. 36 "on the blacktop, we have cars"

[Michael Bailey]

Mark Kohut wrote:
> "obsessively arranged".....in TRPs singled-up lines upon lines....and
> such arranging smacks of linearity gone wild......not-good
>
> Is this not a great line?  Poetry from our lyrical prose stylist of, often, genius: "The trees of the neighboorhood sifted the air green". A pure pastoral visionary moment in TRP.....
>
> What development and industrialism have caused us to lose all over....
>
> Discuss....
>

hey, if you ignore sentence spacing you get a haiku:

"up and down the streets
the trees of the neighborhood
sifted the air green"





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"Under the chocolate, the bananas!"

--Graffito, p-list, September 2009