V---2nd, Chap 16

[Mark Kohut]

I, with Laura, have and still don't like most of this chapter. 
I don't get what all the sailor partying is about here.....seems 
very overdone. 

maybe it was written as a story to get pubbed and wasn't. It does remind me
(a little) of Entropy, that hothouse party story..... \

Which maybe came together for TRP when he found the inside the house 
vs.-outside-the house
 and entropy metaphor.?