Dr. Vanderjuice joke

[Mark Kohut]

Better.

When I read it it went.  

It is tense. 

Better? 

----- Original Message -----
From: jochen stremmel <jstremmel at gmail.com>
To: Mark Kohut <markekohut at yahoo.com>
Cc: pynchon -l <pynchon-l at waste.org>
Sent: Monday, April 2, 2012 2:07 AM
Subject: Re: Dr. Vanderjuice joke

As no native speaker I'd like to know if

Past, Present & Future walk into a bar.
They are all tense.

is just as good or better. As a joke I mean.

2012/4/2 Mark Kohut <markekohut at yahoo.com>:
> Past, Present & Future walked into a bar.
> They were all tense.