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[Jochen Stremmel]

Nice quote:

"You need to edit.
I will never all [sic] read such ramblings."

Both succinct and polite.

Am Di., 29. Okt. 2019 um 07:40 Uhr schrieb peterthooper at juno.com <
peterthooper at juno.com>:

> thanks for the feedback. I get it - stuff could be said more succinctly.
> Not my favorite leisure prose style but okay.
>
> A) 120 Tomahawk missiles is a far less effective statement against
> chemical warfare than cleaning up Agent Orange, land mines, or depleted
> uranium would be.
>
> B) I read 3 different viewpoints on this and shared my reactions as I
> tried to form a viewpoint.
> Some facts emerged. Some of them are interesting. I think it’s worth
> looking at a variety of sources.
>
>
> For you, David, I have this: stuff could be said more politely.
>
> ---------- Original Message ----------
> From: David Morris <fqmorris at gmail.com>
>
> You need to edit.
> I will never all [sic] read such ramblings.
> David Morris
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