SLSL Intro: poorly written?

[tyro tortoise]

--- Tim Strzechowski <dedalus204 at attbi.com> wrote:
> "Tyro," I disagree.  I happen to think _Finnegans
> Wake_ and _Absolam,
> Absolam!_ are two of the most beautifully written
> works I've ever read, and
> not too many readers would say that "effectively
> constructed paragraphs" and
> "clarity, conciseness, and vividness" come to mind
> with either of those
> works.

FW and AA are novels.  The SL Introduction is poorly
written essay. 

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