SLSL Intro: What Pynchon or his editor should have done WAS Re: SLSL Racial Differences

[s~Z]

>I'd say Pynchon's editor was remiss in not sending
>the paragraph back to him
>with a thick red line through this sentence and a
>large question mark in the
>margin beside it. It's not at all clear "who" or
>"what" he's talking about.

>>>The reader must deal with the material
Pynchon approved for publication.<<<

Criticizing the quality of his craft is not a legitimate way of dealing?
Why?