The 'Waste' Law | bad grammar

[Mr Haney]

>and that it is he, rather than those personages who,>in possession of benefits derived from business practices>not overly anchored to concern for their fellow people,>that might be nervous about the light shed on their activities>by his work (though still courageous enough to publish it)?"
ewww, that doesn't parse!
 
leave out the "who,", mm-kay? a-and maybe convert "those" 
to something like "certain" as well?
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