atddta 32: loose ends Dally

[Mark Kohut]

Here is the irony I think about, as I spend way too much time online, on pynchon, on trying to get his vision-----a deep part of which, imho, is to enjoy the beautiful days---be for the day not against it, as you can!

"grladams at teleport.com" <grladams at teleport.com> wrote:  The last time I posted was before it when the temperatures were still in
the 40's where I live. There’s nothing crazier than living in a dark cold
climate, and when the sun comes out everyone goes nuts. You couldn’t pay me
to sit inside. I had left the chapter a little bit unfinished because I had
hoped to tie up a few loose ends. 

1)compare Yashmeen’s angular Olive Oil body (a person who studies a lot
will be underdeveloped) versus Dally’s “rangy nakedness” ~917 ish. (a
person who lives as a street waif, model, yes, and high class hooker, but
rangy is also strong, maybe sinewy strong)
2)I wanted Kit and Dally to get back together--didn't you? So, reading
ahead, one might want to tab this chapter to look at Kit and Dally here,
for future events with Kit and Dally to compare. Kit rehashes her paid
relationship with Crouchmas, but does he realize that she's also being paid
by Lew? How long does her bipolar payroll continue? Naturally she's not
worried about money then, the moment when she obtains head from Kit again.
She definitely is a top. Also noteworthy, on that note, is that she
penetrates the tower and then later there's a tower behind her in some
scene. Sorry, don't know where...
3)Likewise, put a sticky note-tab in the part at the sumptuous Overlunch
residence, for this returns as well. 
4)I had really wanted to "look up to" Dally and thought about her every day
while crafting my pieces. The waiter with the fish soup says she's up for
something much more demanding. Will have to see how that pans out. 


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