TMOP: Chapter 6 pgs 50 - 65

Mark Kohut markekohut at yahoo.com
Wed Oct 8 07:29:45 CDT 2008


a great close reading, gloss and annotation.


--- On Tue, 10/7/08, Bekah <Bekah0176 at sbcglobal.net> wrote:

> From: Bekah <Bekah0176 at sbcglobal.net>
> Subject: TMOP:  Chapter 6 pgs 50 - 65
> To: "pynchon -l" <pynchon-l at waste.org>
> Cc: "Richard Ryan" <richardryannyc at yahoo.com>
> Date: Tuesday, October 7, 2008, 3:40 PM
> I've tried to send this twice before - I'm not
> getting through!
> 
> Anna Sergeyevna
> 
> [pages 50 - 51   Dostoevsky returns to the shop where Anna
> waits on  
> him - he buys sugar.  She says soothing words to him
> although there  
> is a man who looks vaguely familiar there.   He wonders why
> he bought  
> sugar. ]
> 
> * Because Matroyona offered him sugar with tea (pg 23).  
> Because  
> sugar is innocuous and he's suddenly feels a bit
> amorous  - and  
> although he has a devoted wife back in Dresden,   he's
> truly grieving  
> his son  and needs the emotional connection - a common
> phenomenon.
> 
> **********
> [pages 51 - 52 -  Dostoevsky writes a note to Apollon
> Maykov.]
> 
> * Maykov was a Russian poet and long-term friend of
> Dostoevsky.   
> Dostoevsky once wrote him a 12-page letter to asking borrow
> 150 rubles.
> 
> **********
> 
> [page 52:  -  D. is not grieving - he is paralyzed like a
> stone.   ]
> 
> **  I think he's wrong,  but because D. says it's
> from his own  
> experience I can't really disagree.   - Nevertheless, 
> each  
> experience of grief is different.  D.  has no idea if
> he's grieving  
> or not.   Imo,  he is - and Coetzee is as well (at this
> point - this  
> book may have been cathartic for Coetzee - but that's
> not really  
> opening myself up to the pages, is it?)   This shock and
> denial D.   
> seems to be experiencing is part of the grief process in
> many  
> cases.   Just because it wasn't like this with D.'s
>  first wife  
> ( died about 4 years prior) or Sophia, his infant daughter
> who died  
> only months before, doesn't mean it's not grief
> just the same.
> 
> There might be some complications with this grief because
> he never  
> was Pavel's natural father - that bond was never there
> - he could be  
> seeking a substitute at this point, I suppose.   (But now I
> feel I'm  
> definitely getting too far away from what Coetzee intended
> -  see? I  
> do have my limits.)  (heh).
> 
> [ Page 52 continues:  "This is death, death coming
> before its time,  
> come not to overwhelm him and devour him but simply to be
> with him.   
> It is like a dog that has taken up residence with him, a
> big grey  
> dog, blind and deaf and stupid and immovable.  When he
> sleeps the dog  
> sleeps; when he wakes, the dog wakes;  when he leave the
> house , the  
> dog shambles behind him. "]
> 
> *  Coetzee often uses dogs and other animals as metaphor -
> most  
> apparent in Disgrace - and beyond metaphor in Elizabeth
> Costello,   
> "The Lives of Animals" and I think, "Diary
> of a Bad Year."   -  I  
> think D. is on auto-pilot,  he's like an animal,
> he's lost his power  
> of reason,  his dignity,  his creativity, his soul?
> 
> [ page 52: And he thinks of Anna's fingers counting
> coins and  
> stitches - he asks,  "what do they stand for?" ]
> 
> ** they stand for movement - for creativity,  for life.  
> And  
> Matryona's mother in "At Tikhon's was a
> seamstress.  Stitches of time  
> - a common metaphor.
> 
> ***********
> 
> [page 53: - He is sitting at his desk in his room
> remembering  
> children, dead and alive, visions - "He is not in
> control of  
> himself..." ]
> 
> 
> "Why this plodding chase across empty country after
> the rumour of a  
> ghost, the ghost of a rumour?"
> "Because I am he. Because he is I."
>  From Demons:   “I also know that it was not you who ate
> the idea,  
> but the idea that ate you...”
> 
> 
> Coetzee has his own demon and he's cannibalizing the
> dead and the  
> historical.
> 
> ************
> 
> [ Page 54 -  The axe of death is mentioned as well as an ox
> as  
> metaphor for the heart.   Pondering the moment before the
> moment of  
> realization of imminent death.  And thinking of someone he
> loves - ]
> 
> his wife?  Anna?
> 
> [ He sleeps and goes downstairs.  Anna asks him for tea. 
> "He is not  
> in control of himself." ]
> 
> * Thus excusing his imminent adultery?
> 
> [She puts down her sewing.]
> and she's available.
> 
> ***********
> [Page 55 -  Dostoevsky and Anna approach each other aware
> of their  
> aging bodies.] -
> Very aware of their  mortality.    They're both in
> their mid-40s.
> 
> 
> *******
> [Page 56 - They spend the night in Dostoevsky's
> son's room - probably  
> because Matryona is sleeping in Anna's room.  
> Anna's body is very  
> hot to the touch - "it excites him that they should be
> doing such  
> fiery, dangerous work with the child asleep in the next
> room."   They  
> sleep but when he tries to arouse Anna later,  she is
> "like a dead  
> thing in his arms"  but he goes ahead, forcing himself
> on her.
> 
> * This scene echoes  "Stavrogin's Confession"
> where Stavrogin rapes  
> the daughter,  Matryona.  The rape is not so clear in the
> second  
> version of SC,  which is the one published today as an
> appendix.
> http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2005/12/11/18813/944
> 
>   [As he climaxes in the sleeping woman's body,  the
> vision of Pavel  
> rises up.  "It bursts upon him, possesses him, speeds
> on."]
> 
> * Sex as death by falling?   An opportunity for a demon to
> overtake  
> him however momentarily?  (more later)
> 
> -  I'm quite sure that several here can do far more
> justice to this  
> section than I can.  I know what's going on;  I just
> don't have the  
> words or the allusions.
> 
> *******
> [ Page 57 -  When Dostoevsky wakes he's alone in the
> apartment and   
> is impatient and (metaphors deleted) to see Anna but at
> supper she is  
> cool and then goes to bed,  not waking up when he calls
> her.  She's  
> now sleeping with Matryona.]
> 
> 
> *************
> 
> [Page 58 -  He tries again and the "women" do not
> stir... ]
> 
> * Now here's a distinct sign as to his attitude toward
> the daughter.   
> - She's not a 14 year-old child at this point,
> she's a woman.)
> 
> [... but he notices that the girl sleeps with her eyes open
> as if  
> watching, with a slight smile and  with an arm over her
> mother like a  
> bat.]
> 
> * A bat?  Or a possessive child saying "Mine!"?  
>  Or maybe bat, as  
> in a flying creature of the night?  Certainly no cherub or
> angel.  -  
> yup - shades of The Master and Margarita here.  And it must
> be  
> remembered that this is D.'s understanding  (reading,
> if you will) of  
> her,  not her mother's, for instance.
> 
> [ Anna comes to him on a future night and again the
> experience is  
> like going to where his son is - with others - to death. 
> He tries to  
> tell Anna but she is not interested.]
> 
> Anna probably thinks D. is flipping  out.  Besides, 
> I'm sure she's  
> not flattered by what he's using her for.
> 
> Cannibalization again -
> 
> *****
> 
> [Page 59 - Anna doesn't return to his room  so he
> writes her a letter  
> which she doesn't open.  He goes to the shop but she
> turns her back.   
> He asks her why the avoidance - she replies it's
> obvious - he was in  
> need,  he used her and now it's done.  He objects.
> 
>   Anna - "You are using me to get to someone else...
> You have a wife  
> of your own."   and "You were pleading."
> 
> [Page 50-60 D.  remembers the words,  "A wife of your
> own."   and he  
> thinks -  "My wife is too young...Too young for me as
> I am now!"
>   [ Italics from book.]
> 
> *  D. is sooo aware of his tired, old  mortality - his wife
> is about  
> the age Pavel was.
> 
> *  and the words,  "You were pleading" will come
> back to haunt him.
> 
> **********
> 
> [Page 60   D. realizes that when he returns to his wife he
> will want  
> Anna.   He goes to his room and calls to Pavel.  But the
> vision that  
> comes is of Nechaev. "Nechaev is no student hothead,
> no youthful  
> nihilist.  He is the Mongol left behind in the Russian soul
> after the  
> greatest nihilist of all has withdrawn into the wastes of
> Asia." ]
> 
> *  The Mongols invaded Russia in 1237 and generally
> occupied it until  
> 1552.  They moved the capital to Moscow, appointed or
> validated the  
> tsars and  and didn't leave until  Ivan the Terrible
> conquered them  
> in 1552 and became the Russian Tsar of all Russia.  This
> era left a  
> huge cultural gulf between Russia and Western Europe. 
> Russia was not  
> part of the Renaissance (14th-15th centuries throughout
> Western  
> Europe)  or the Reformation (M. Luther- theses - 1521). 
> They were  
> totally out of the loop when Peter the Great took the
> throne in 1682  
> and tried to catch up with Europe.  And the Russians took
> to the  
> French influence and let that influence shape their
> aesthetics from  
> the time of Catherine the Great,  1762.
> 
> Dostoevsky considered the Mongol influence to be the
> origins of the  
> dark side of the Russian soul but after his stint in the
> Tsar's  
> prisons and military he was not enamoured of the West
> either.  Like  
> other Russian intellectuals of the times,  he was searching
> for the  
> Russian soul.  (See Natasha's Dance by Orlando Figes.)
> 
>  From http://www.utoronto.ca/tsq/DS/01/003.shtml:
> 
> "...  Gorkij's insistence in a letter ... in 1911
> that Dostoevsky was  
> a writer who "with the greatest power and lucidity
> depicted the  
> spiritual illnesses grafted upon us from the Mongol,  the
> mutilations  
> inflicted on our soul by painful Muscovite history."
> 
> And here Coetzee directly addresses Nechaev's Catechism
> by quoting:
> 
> [  "  'The revolutionary is a doomed man,' it
> began. 'He has no  
> interests, no feelings, no attachments, not even a name. 
> Everything  
> in him is absorbed in a single and total passion:
> revolution.  In the  
> depths of his being he has cut all links with the civil
> order, with  
> law and morality.  He continues to exist in society only in
> order to  
> destroy it.'   and later,  'He does not expect the
> least mercy.   
> Every day he is ready to die.' "
> 
> Dostoevsky used the Catechism in Demons and Peter
> Verkhovensky was  
> pretty much true to form.
> 
> ************
> 
> [Page 61 - * How can a child  understand that?   The vision
> of  
> Nechaev is present - Pavel, the image of him,  cannot
> return.]
> 
> * The "child" is  Pavel.  D. doesn't consider
> him old enough or  
> mature enough to understand revolutionary thought.  Pavel
> was  21  
> years old, almost 22.  Pavel may be D's child but at
> 21,  he's no  
> "child."  Still,  he probably couldn't have
> the same understanding of  
> revolutionary thought that a man in his mid-40s would have.
>   Excuse  
> me,  Nechaev is only 22 at the time and Nechaev wrote it -
> at least  
> in part.    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sergey_Nechayev
> 
> [ D.  will meet Anna and Matryona  after they go to church
> and the  
> three will go to Petrovsky Island.]
> 
> Petrovsky Ostrov is one of five islands that make up the
> part of St.  
> Petersburg called the Petrograd Side. The other four are
> Zayachy,  
> Kronverksky, Petrogradsky, and Aptekarsky islands.
> Together, they are  
> the oldest part of the city. Petrovsky Ostrov is where
> Petrovsky  
> Stadium, where the 1994 Goodwill Games were held, is
> located.   
> Insignificantly, Raskolnikov collapses there in "Crime
> and Punishment."
> 
> A nice place:  "View from Petrovskii Island in St.
> Petersburg" by  
> Silvestr Shchedrin,  (1815)
> http://www.rollins.edu/Foreign_Lang/Russian/shche.jpg
> 
> [ In the morning Dostoevsky trips over a tramp in the
> doorway and  
> curses.  The tramp reappears at the church where Dostoevsky
> asks if  
> he is following him.  The tramp ignores him and the tramp
> "sidles  
> off,"  leans against a post, feigns a yawn.  No
> gloves, only a  
> blanket rolled into a muff. ]
> 
> * This tramp will show up again - he's Coetzee's
> version of Ivan  
> Ivanov whom  Dostoevsky used as Shatov in Demons.
> 
> ********************
> Page 62.
> 
> [Voznesensky Prospekt ]
>   Dostoevsky lived on this street for many years.
> http://www.russian-st-petersburg.com/photo/citytour/st-isaacs.jpg
> 
> 
> [ D., Anna and Matryona go to the island where D. thinks of
> them as  
> being a family,  "...only a fourth required and we
> will be complete." ]
> 
> 
> 
> 
> * D. is missing Pavel because he's sure not looking to
> the future.
> 
> [ Matryona plays like a child and D. recognizes that she
> will be a  
> beauty. ]
> 
> * a little foreshadowing there?
> 
> * D. is concerned with what his wife would think - he's
> had prior  
> affairs and, without detail,  "confessed," 
> causing more grief than  
> the affair.
> (Dostoevsky was a man of deep conscience which tortured his
> sensuous  
> and risk-taking side.)
> 
> * But in this case he feels no guilt -
> 
> [perhaps because he is grabbing Anna for his very life -
> for the life- 
> force she carries to counteract the death force impact of
> Pavel and  
> associated thoughts.]
> 
> ***************
> Page 63
> 
> *Anna's passion.    "Falling, but never an
> irrevocable falling.  No:  
> to fall and then come back from the fall new, remade,
> virginal, ready  
> to be wooed again and to fall again.  A playing with death,
> a play of  
> resurrection."
> 
> [  Pavel fell to his death - Coetzee's son fell to his
> death.  But  
> falling as Anna does is not irrevocable,  the faller comes
> back,  
> resurrected.  This is what D. wants for  Pavel. ]
> 
> [ Because  Pavel never died in real life -  I believe that 
> 
> inescapably there is much of Coetzee here. ]
> 
> * D.  - "I could love this woman."  ... "He
> and she are of the same  
> generation. And all of a sudden the generations fall into
> place."    
> And he puts Pavel into the same generation as Matryona -
> They are  
> probably about 7 years apart.  (Matryona is about 14, I
> believe.)  He  
> takes this difference in generations into the physical
> sexual  
> experience they had with her body in flames fighting age.
> 
> *  He ranks the generations:   "The children against
> those who are  
> not children, those old enough to recognize in their
> lovemaking the  
> first foretaste of death.  Hence the urgency that night,
> hence the  
> heat."
> 
> 
> Page 64   *Anna brings up Siberia.  D. offers the info that
> this is  
> where he met Pavel's mother - Pavel was about 7 then.  
> They married  
> after Pavel's father died.  Then a few years later
> Pavel's mother  
> died also.
> 
> * Anna says that Pavel described her as being
> "young."   D. realizes  
> that his current wife, also named Anna,  is in the same age
> category  
> as Pavel and Matroyona.
> 
> [ Dostoevsky met Maria Dmitrievna Isaev  (wife #1) while
> part of the  
> Tsar's military stationed in Siberia near the border
> with China.   
> It's a fairly tortured story with Maria not in love
> with Dostoevsky  
> and Dostoevsky tortured by obsessive jealousy.  They
> married in 1859,  
> she died in 1864.   He started Demons under the original
> title, "The  
> Great Sinner," after reading about the death of I.I.
> Ivanov at the  
> hands of People's Vengeance (Nechaev).
> http://www.dartmouth.edu/~karamazo/bio05.html
> http://www.dartmouth.edu/~karamazo/bio09.html   ]
> 
> [ Anna/wife was hired by Dostoevsky at the age of 20 in
> 1866.
> http://www.dartmouth.edu/~karamazo/bio07.html  ]
> 
> * Anna S. tells D. that Pavel was afraid of losing D.   D.
> denies  
> this saying,  "From the day I became his father I
> never once failed  
> him.  Am I failing him now?"
> She tells him children are jealous -
> 
> Page 65
> * D. thinks of Matryona and her possible jealousy.
> * Anna tells D. some of what Pavel told her - it's
> painful for D. but  
> he wants to know so he can ask forgiveness.  She tells him
> Pavel was  
> lonely and would talk. He needed to talk.
> * D. asks Matryona if she remembers anything.  Anna stops
> him - it's  
> not right to ask a child something like that.
> 
> (Could be leading into "Confessions"?)


      




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